Go easy on me - my very first original

[MrJLR]

My very first original song....
I've had lots of ideas over the years, but this is the first one I ever did anything with.
8 bar blues in A







Jeff

 

[MrJLR]

Tied Up And Twisted by Jeff Rowlette

Tied Up And Twisted - Original composition by Jeff Rowlette 2023 #Rock #Blues #Guitar

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[simoncroft]

Your performance is really good! Great, honest Blues performance. Everything nicely done, including very polished guitar and vocals. The mix could probably benefit from a little tweaking. Please PM me if you'd like more details.

 

[MrJLR]

Your performance is really good! Great, honest Blues performance. Everything nicely done, including very polished guitar and vocals. The mix could probably benefit from a little tweaking. Please PM me if you'd like more details.

PM sent

 

[Dadocaster]

Pat yourself on the back. You did it, most people never do. Congrats. Listen to Simoncroft and you may be using monitors or headphones that are lying to you.

Good style, good swagger and I like that your guitar tone is not perfectly typical for the genre. Vox work great for the material.

Well done.

 

[MrJLR]

Tried it give it the Tightrope (SRV) bounce.....

Jeff

 

[MrJLR]

Pat yourself on the back. You did it, most people never do. Congrats. Listen to Simoncroft and you may be using monitors or headphones that are lying to you.

Good style, good swagger and I like that your guitar tone is not perfectly typical for the genre. Vox work great for the material.

Well done.

I'm sending @simoncroft files and he's gonna help me with the mix.

My headphones are from the 70's....lol....not kidding, they were my grandpa's!


Jeff

 

[CigBurn]

Really nice.. Definitely worth the work. Will be cool to see how this develops.

 

[floydrose]

Yes, very nice playing and singing JLR.

 

[MrJLR]

Notice my nod to Mr. Hendrix?
"I can chop a mountain"...!
Lol....we alllllll steal....

Jeff

 

[MT Poteet]

Excellent.

Wish I could pull that off.

 

[MrJLR]

T

Excellent.

Wish I could pull that off.

Thank you!!!!!


Jeff

 

[Rene Asologuitar]

Lovely!
I am digging this performance!

 

[Frank Roberts]

Way to go, Jeff!

I think it's great and real. Nevertheless, you can benefit from Simon's advice. His interest is, in my view, a compliment.

 

[Murdog]

Nice!

 

[Andytones74]

Nice work man

 

[MrJLR]

Thanks guys!
I'm encouraged.....I have a lot of ideas....guess I'll get to work!!!


Jeff

 

[Mansonienne]

I really like it! Well done!

 

[MrJLR]

I really like it! Well done!

Not terrible for my very first one?!
Damn, I've been holding it in for 40 years...I guess it's time!

Jeff

 

[Sonny Poremba]

I Dig it! Your voice reminds me of a bit of Keith Richards. Great tune, Well played!

Sonny